All Comments on 'Mrs. Scott's Ordeal'

Great story, really enjoyed how it progressed. I'm hoping there are plans for more chapters

I really enjoyed this story, especially the Dom being surprised. You have to write some chapters

I enjoyed every bit of it. It kept me wanting more. Love the characters and scenes. Sinful Delight ;-)

As a switch myself you perfectly captured both elements of D/S and captivated me with your words. Please continue it and thank you for your time!

This slave was in awe and came many times reading this. Your description of her breaking through the walls into subspace was spectacular.

Thank you Sir x

I'm quite sure I could hold out like that in a first session. I like that he questioned himself. It showed he was aware of where they were in the relation. The problem for him now is, how to push further.

Stay tuned, I hope

Loved the combination of caring AND humiliation. Really well done.

Very impressive the ordeal would have taken hours and the subjet would have been very stressed a slut that could take this would be exceptional and very rare my only hope would be to find one

Couldn’t finish your story of the wannabe Dom or should that be the whore because he’s being paid for sex?

I hope you’re aware that there is more than one type of BDSM? Not every sub gets off on pain and humiliation - seriously a woman in her mid forties with low self esteem because her arsehole husband is a cheating scum bag and you thought humiliation was the way to go??

I think the only thing I noticed that was right was the explanation of safewords.

Tess

I loved your story. I loved the way you gave the sub permission and frequent reminders that she could end the session at any time and yet her need to submit motivated her to continue. I loved the forcefullness of your domination mingled with empathy and care. I also love intense nipple and anal play. Your story has all the right elements to make me feel connected and like I so wish I could be her.

I really lived your story. From the mundaneness of the Peggy Scott character to her gradual transformation into (or revelation as) a sub, it was a very realistic tale that had me hooked till the end.

An interesting and enjoyable tale of the discovery of a true submissive.

Thank you for publishing this beautifully prepared and written work.