by atkins
I am so glad you are back writing on here.
Your stories ALWAYS do it for me.
So realistic ad believable
Thanks.
Dont leave it so long next time please.
A nicely written and sensitive erotic story, that rang most of my bells. My only beef is that the very end, the afterword almost, turns the author into a cad. I'm not a big advocate of "and they lived happily ever after", but the abrupt cool down was a slight downer. But I'll give you points for bucking the usual trend for endings.
SOMETIMES THE WAIT IS WORTH THE END RESULTS.
Good subject, good story line, but your writing style is amazing!! You could probably write the telephone book and make it interesting.
A notable and real example of human interaction. Thanks .. a great read.
Gosh but you are a first rate writer. I enjoyed this story immensely. Thanks for sharing. Kal
It's great. This is one of very few stories when I felt almost sentimental. Great Characters, very roamntic and sensual story. I really wish there was a sequel
An exceptionally well-written piece of erotica. I would love a sequel. Perhaps John and Gretchen need to rekindle their lustful emotions for each other.
This was a well written story, and I love older women so this was something very visceral for me. The slow build up was well done and the coupling that they finally shared was amazing. I do wish, however, that they would have had a few more encounters before calling it quits completely, but apparently it was what they both needed from each other at that time and that was all.