All Comments on 'Mrs Watts Is A Cheating Bitch Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

What an excellent story! Glorious, voluptuous, big titted milf bitch that knows exactly what she wants - money and a big cock, not necessarily in that order! I like it.

estragonestragonover 13 years ago
Wish She Was in My Law Firm

Who needs a resume? Great hot stuff. Wish it was just like real life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awful

Dude, this is a non-story. 75% financial babble and 25% sex -- it should be the other way around. This is an erotic story site, not a business journal.

beast26beast26over 13 years ago
Great story

Hopefully you will write a CH. 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

take your meds

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
ZZZzzzzzz

Lost interest before it even got to the sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
1 star

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demantoiddemantoidover 13 years ago
Too cartoonish,

I wanted to really enjoy this story and at the beginning of the story I was encouraged, then it went downhill, as every character turned into Saturday morning cartoons for the zwieback set. No tension developed between either adversarial side and the ultimate settlement was ridiculous. Good luck on the next chapter.

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 13 years ago
It had possibilities

Possibilities it didn't live up too. Chris made it through law school and to being a lead in a case that big by being easily manipulated?

I don't think so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent series start...

Great start to a new series. Loved the build up for this new character. Mrs Watts has a lot of potential (married, cheating and a bitch to her unsuspecting husband! what's not to like?).

Realism is very much not a required element here!

Keep the stories coming, I really wanna read the next one asap.

RePhilRePhilover 13 years ago
Typical lawyer no human quality worth saving

How about killing him off in the next chapter? People and women like these are just a waste of space and oxygen. They don't even make good fertilizer! Lol It would be interesting to see if you could write with a strong male charActor in the story? Not sure if this story was spawned from personal experience or not. If so keep hope because there are better man and women out there than any charators in this story, truly

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

wow you may of invented an even sexier character than Polly here, something I wasn't sure was possible, but next time she needs to reveal those massive cans and have a real big cocked stud who can match her

minxsstudminxsstudover 13 years ago
great story

Glad to have you back acdd123!

chytownchytownalmost 8 years ago
Great Read*****

Very entertaining and sexy. Damn good piece of writing!!! Thanks for sharing.

nixroxnixroxalmost 2 years ago

5 stars - i like this story

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