All Comments on 'Ms. Adler: The Doctor's Office'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Very Nice Start!!

Story is starting out very nicely, Ms Adler is in complete control, but how did she get to that point?

Next chapter should tell how she was able to control the doctors receptionist as well as a patient, then continue with how she will control others, looking forward to the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
dont stop

Please keep the story going. Sounds like it could go a long way

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Author of Irene Adler series, in which Ms. Adler uses her abilities to compel others to fulfil her fantasties.

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