All Comments on 'Ms. Stacey and Ashley'

Fun to try and read, more like a train of thought than anything else. Use paragraphs to break up events and I'd strongly suggest an editor. NTL, it was a fun story.

I took one look at this mess, skipped trying to read it, and gave it an automatic rating of 1.

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If you don't give a fuck about your own story, why should anyone?

This could be a really good story if the lack of paragraphs, sentence fragments, run-ons, and incorrect punctuation weren't completely distracting.

Decent read. I don t mind the structure of how its written. I just take it for what it is, a quickie

The authority figure always seems very temping. to a younger female, especially Ashley. Looks like there will more homework assignments at other placers..!!

good story, needs to be broken up into paragraphs.

I’m really liking this story and it was great. I love the way the sexy women in leather shorts makes the other sexy women feel sexy to.🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍🌈🏳️‍🌈🌈🌈🌈🌈👩👩‍❤️‍👩👩‍❤️‍💋‍👩👭