All Comments on 'Much Love Forever. M. Pt. 01'

by joe_of_diamonds

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marklionmarklionalmost 15 years ago
Nice Start!!!!

You wrote a nice start to a series. I like how Joe was able to find a place in start fixing it up along the shore. I like how he and Michelle had fun in the bedroom with Michelle's daughter in the front room sleeping. Why did you put it this story incest/taboo category? You plan on the daughter getting into the action with mother? It was a good story though. Hardly wait for the next chapter

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
What did star mean about business?

I thought Chelle was a school teacher in Maryland, but is she a whore on the side. A good story for a start and hope to read more in the series. Thanks......... Rich

DrenchxoxoDrenchxoxoalmost 15 years ago
Impressive start

I can't wait to read Part. 2!

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