All Comments on 'Muggy Nights'

by candylandsky

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theognistheognisabout 13 years ago
*****

Nice start.

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I liked it :D But it seems like you changed the girl's name in the middle of it (from Julie to Cathy...) just a heads up, since you said that you were gonna work on it some more :P

Cheers~

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
= )

more please

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