All Comments on 'Mulligan's Island'

And you are right I always wondered why there were no children on the island for as long as they were there can't wait for more

Was this supposed to be a four-some? From my count, Betty Ann is being seduced by both Pepper and Ginger, while Mary Ann is writhing under the touch of Ginger and Pepper.

If you read your story after you write it, you'll catch errors like that.

You're story is better than many, if not most of them?

Good story though.

:)

You're story is better than many, if not most of them.

(I meant it as a statement; sorry folks about the error)