by devondipper
though disappointed I'm being forced to wait for the inevitable. :(
This is indeed an excellent start. The hero of the story is clearly a mommy-loving guy. Translating from Britspeak makes that obvious. He tells his mother, "Oh, one more thing," I said casually, "You could lose the knickers as well, you can see the outline of them through the lycra." "Knickers" means panties, so he wants mom to toss her panties, the better to view what they usually hide. Then: "the thin material had moulded to her pronounced mound of Venus, delineating a magnificent cameltoe, as it was drawn into the crack of her fanny." "Fanny" means pussy, so the son--like lots of sons do in secret--really enjoys the sight of his mother's splayed cunt-lips. Why the heck shouldn't he? They're the entrance to the wonderful hairy hole he came out of. Viewing it gets him hard in his pants. Wanna guess what he's going to do with that big hard of his and his minx of a mother's warm wet welcoming mommy-hole?
I have never commented on a part 01 before as I wait to see what happens as a story develops but this is different! I loved the way the author got the back story out of the way in one fell swoop but still gave us more information than many others manage in pages and pages (me included as I am more of a rambler myself!) to get us to where the story really starts. I enjoyed immensely the use of English colloquial terms (Britspeak as anon charmingly put it) and the depictions of the behaviour in pubs was spot on. Let's get the son into her plus sized knickers and those big, fat nipples into his mouth and see how good some mum/son loving can be! Keep up the "Britspeak" (that's my new favourite term in case you hadn't noticed!) as well as it helps place this story so well in its location. Get part 02 here as soon as you can...
So often, a 'part1' is offered with the promise of more to come, which never happens. This is excellent, so please don't disappoint us...
Very promising start, this could go a long, long way. Let's have some more, and soon please!
I fear the son is too much a perv for the good care of his mum