by MissYellowPanties
MISS YELLOW PANTIES, A-LOOKIN' FOR GLORY
MISS YELLOW PANTIES, WROTE A LOUSY STORY
IT'S CLICHED AND IT'S SILLY AND PREDICTABLY GAY!
CAUSE MISS YELLOW PANTIES AIN'T GOT SHIT TO SAY!
Ignore the hater, the story was well written and a great fantasy, fuck that guy, please write more
Fuck Paddles.
He's a cheerleader who thnks good is bad and bad is good!
I'm so glad I didn't pass this up, you write very well and have a beautifully dirty mind!
This was the last story I read and while not as deep as the other wonderful tales it was so hot. Thank you Missyellowpanties! Please don't let the phobes discourage you from writing more, you have a great gift to share with those who are comfortable enough with themselves to experience it.
Sincerely,
Rikki B
Really well written story. Good character creation & excellent dialogue.
I'm sorry you got trashed in the comments, especially by an anonymous twit. I honestly don't understand why somebody would get grossed out by the story. If it's in Trans & Cross Dress section, sooner or lster a cock is gonna get sucked & an ass is honna get fucked. If it grosses them out, why read it in the first place? Oh, msybe they thought theu wete in the Incest category. Buncha pervs, wouldn't know quality writing of it came up & tickled their balls.
When the ache is so overwhelming, it makes even a Murphy attractive. Great Story.