All Comments on 'Murphy's Law'

What was this?

Its only worth one star. Quit writing you worthless fucktard.

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I'd like to see one of Ashon's stories that did not involve rape (where was the consent, boys? the rule about utmost resistance died some years back in the civilized parts of the English speaking world - the statutes all talk about consent, and the fact (?) that Ashon's victims always have orgasms doesn't change it

"If you like your wife, you can KEEP your wife!"

"If you like your marriage, you can KEEP your marriage!"

After the fucking (and maybe the cream-pie), you will find that the phrase "UNLESS you live near one of Ashson's protagonists!" was omitted from the promises!

4*

BTW...a woman asking a man to evaluate her breasts mitigates a lot of the subsequent (and barely- or un-blocked) liberties!

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Ashson pile of crap

Ashon is really a rapist, it's all he writes about.

He raped her, plain and simple. And your writing made it seem like it was no big deal. Two things - shouldn't have been posted in LW. Secondly, your writing really sucks.

If you think about it, she yelled rape so many times everybody at the BBQ knew what was going on.

What?

Gordon discovered how much Murphy hated him when he grabbed Alison's boob and, being startled, let out an involuntary shriek. The guests, hearing the commotion rushed over to determine what was going on. But Gordon, rather than simply extricating his hand, had it caught in her straps and realizing that he had mistimed his act, ripped it out and, subsequently, ripped her dress.

At this point, Alison screamed and with one hand holding up the tattered remains of her dress, punched Gordon in the nose, breaking it and sending him flying. Her husband, seeing the ripped dress and his wife's tears, tackled Gordon and began laying punch after punch into his ribs and face. Sadly, there were two off-duty constables and being a witness to Gordon attempted rape, arrested him and threw him into lock up for 24 hours. But Gordon's bad day didn't end yet because no sooner than the police turned their backs when Gordon's three roommates began to teach him the fine art of anal sex, receiving and without lube.

24 hours later, Gordon is released and besides walking funny and the perpetual bad taste in his mouth when they set him free,

For the read,

She likes it hard and rough.

For Ashton, a story without a rape is like ass without a hole. Not happening.

Very rapey. Not much to like.

... And when Michael finds out, Gordon's carcass will make the barbeque seem like it was cooked rare.

That will be Gordon's REAL bad day.