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by redgiantuk

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raconteuseraconteuseabout 13 years ago
Well done!

I think you were a bit carried away with the excitement of writing so a few spelling errors crept in there, but, unusually they did not give me pause. Gorgous build-up and wonderful description. A fine story indeed. You have the mark of an excellent writer, and a bit of tidying up will bring it all home. Keep writing!

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