All Comments on 'Mussoorie Days Ch. 01'

keep writing

Please proceed

Put it in the bin and don't bother writing any more

Please cunt-in-u :) It was great :)

I enjoyed that - a good start! Ignore the idiot who said it was rubbish - it wasn't. Keep going....

It was a well written story. Can't wait for chapter 2

Gr8 beginning. i love the way it is shaping up. please continue. i will be waiting for the next part.

well written, i like your style! keep it up

The sex scene description was a bit rushed. Also,add more tease to the lead up to the sex. Overall it was an alright story.

beautiful beginning...cant wait to read more

just loved it @itscrazyworld..i have always fantasized my own female cousin for a long time.as she is older than me so i just grew hard when i read ur story.i was just imagining how it would have been to make love to her.cant wait for the next one...keep writing up...i just love indian incest...

Story goes very hot till end , great art of writing , want more

Thanks a lot for the feedback, guys. I'm glad that most of you liked it. I'm already working on the follow-up which is going to be longer and hotter!

xoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxo

hey looking forward to the sequel...when?

this definitely deserves a sequel