by leejames
but she's got to be a little naive to be putting up with Levi's moves and Luke's posturing. Most women would be annoyed at being fought over like a piece of meat. She's just sitting there and accepting it. That doesn't ring true for me. Looking forward to more, though!
Colorful way of character development. Lots of plot potential. Good idea not to go overboard with a Texas accent. Hard to keep an audience with the time between chapters but you're making worth the wait.