All Comments on 'Mutual Mind Fuck'

by johnnieblue44

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good Start

Are you going to continue with these two characters, she wants to become a sexual goddess seems Paul can teach her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Loved it!

A truly hot story with realistic characters and an interesting storyline! I would love to read more of this so please hurry up and post the next chapter!

stiff_legstiff_legalmost 16 years ago
Ummm

This was an excellent story. Good plot done well with an anticipated ending, but still hot! I look forward to more stories from you.

PutterBoyPutterBoyalmost 16 years ago
you had me at the...

...tiebreaker line. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Oh Yeah!

You know you have to do a chapter or 2 more. This was much too good to leave hanging.

MidnightTemptressMidnightTemptressover 13 years ago
Very Interesting

I found the story very interesting. There were a mixture of emotions and feelings in there that allowed you to take different journeys. I look forward to reading more of your work. ;)

FullboostFullboostover 11 years ago

WOW! This rocks, pleeeeeease do a follow up! He needs to learn where it all came from, then develop a relationship, then the guy who won't get married again........ Marries again!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous