All Comments on 'My Abandon Ch. 02'

11 months between chapters is too long.

This story is incredibly hot! Please don't make me wait too long for another installment. Devon is so sexy and amazing-- the demanding, soft voice and his possessive confidence. I love the way he talks during sex, all " whose pussy is this?" and "good girl" praises. More!

NICE STORY !!!!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE ANOTHER INSTALLMENT. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. DID CHARLIE TELL HER MOTHER ,IF HE DID HOW DID SHE TAKE IT? VERY EROTIC AND HOT GOOD JOB KEEP IT UP WRITE SOON!!!!!!!

That was great. Morte please

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Can't wait for the next one

I like this story. It is an unusual brother/sister incest story. It's a little strange in the dominance part, and I'm a little worried the brother is not just in love, but obsessed in a very scary way. The father in law might make some demands now that he's seen the family fear come to fruition. That would be very dangerous as Devon now considers himself an owner. Well done, a good picture emerges.

Love your writing, keep it up!

the writer is a fucking disturbe sick bastard.

I fukin luv this story never been so turned on before ... wish I had a big brother like him...

It was good. Why didn't you finish

I love this story line. Why didn't you finish? Please continue!