All Comments on 'My Adonis'

Great first story, please continue writing. I'd love to see more. Kisses, Bella

I really enjoyed this! Excellent job!

Great writing. Please continue with another chapter!

instantly knows knows to the 1/4 inch the size of a guys cock.

I;m equally amazed at the guys who feel that they must give their character an over sized cock in order to get a high rating from the children who need that picture to rate the story high.

Me? I stop reading and give it a low score.

But you really need an editor. Poor punctuation and paragraph structure.

The story just needed to be a bit longer! Otherwise, it was great. I liked the way she went after him. But you needed a leand in to that scene. Tell us why she wanted him so much.

Great job hope to read more soon

man that was a hot story

nothing but rape you need some jail time to see what its like to be raped