All Comments on 'My Affair with the Office Girl'

Sort of clinical, don't you know.

As I read this work you submitted I thought, "that was an excellent way to tell a reader this babe was married."

Continuing as I had to after reading the first five paragraphs your work got better and better. Yes there were some un-known words used for an American English reader but the flow of your scene made them easy to discern. Very well done.

Your ending was probably top ten of all endings I have read in eight years of reading on this site.

You write well. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Not the most sexy but sexy enough. Could have been longer in case you wanted to include a threesome.

Great story, hot and clinical, which pretty much sums up an affair...