All Comments on 'My Angel Ch. 01'

Total crap. Quit now.

I liked it. Keep going!

It's all about the fantasy. And everyone's got a different kind of kink inside them. For some it's feet, others it's bondage- and this story fits for someone else. It's not rubbish and anyone saying that probably hasn't written a story of their own, so their opinion is less than worth listening to. Hell, if I were you, I'd simply delete their trashy, unhelpful comments- the assholes didn't even have the decency to offer up credible critiques, just hateful statements.

Yes, the story is clearly unrealistic fantasy. Nothing like that would ever happen in real life, but that's not the point, is it? So fuck 'em. And keep writing. You've got an audience, even if they aren't respectful enough to compliment you on the time you spent writing this.

Story,Keep it up

Stuff it in your ass, Nightshadow. If everyone liked everything, this would be a boring world.

You're just the type who hates to see any sort of criticism. The inability to deal with criticism is a sure sign of immaturity. So... stuff it in your ass.

to anon re: nightshadow, you want talk about maturity with the way you shout down someone elses opinion you must be a democrat. all night said was just because person A hates something doesnt mean we all do. i perswonally didnt get all stiff over the story nor did i just go off on those that did. so take you anti free speech coomie ass somewhere else if you cant respect others opinions on PORN FANTASIES. sincerely a nonwriting fan of good stories you egotistical fuck

Reading this story & hoping for more btw--- I couldn't help it but did anyone else imagine it was Jessica Robbins? Hot new red head in the biz--- anyway please write more

Please continue it

I didn't see any real criticism yet- just off colour comments like "don't quit your day job" and "stop writing." There was not a word of criticism in there- just empty insults. Nothing on the merits of his spelling, what could make the story better, which elements did/didn't work... nothing at all like that. Go on over to Dictionary.Com and look up the meaning of the word. Once you've studied the art of criticism, feel free to leave some. Barring that- you're an insulting wanker, and that's a *criticism* made manifest by your own words.

And one other thing: you're a coward. Gotta post anonymously, do ya? Can't stand behind the conviction of your own words? Flamed.

Ready for chapter 2 and to see how they manage to have a relationship sneaking behind mom's back.

Could do with a bit of proofreading especially toward the beginning, not a lot grammar-wise but I saw a handful of awkward sentences and repetitive wording. Good story, not really my cup of tea but I did enjoy reading it.

We need to find out about Jenna and if MOM catches them. Keep it going. Thanks.

My beautiful step daughter just left the house, she is not the 18 year old like in the story but is in her middle 30's with one child. I fell for her the first time I ever saw her and dream about doing the things you just wrote about. It is hard to maintain eye contact with her because of her beautiful breasts, but I try really hard, and yes I get hard thats why I came in here to read a story. Well yours sure did the trick as I had a good cum, thanks, I will read the other chapter later. da.cd@frontier.com

Manwhore daddy fucked Jenna....needs a minus 1