by cburton
Total bs, 1. No American ever rides in a vehicle with a foreign national, 2. We don't wear khakis, 3. What's a battle jeep, 4. Nothing would ever take place during a Log Pac, 5. Where's their battle rattle and weapons? 6. There are no first names in the military, it's rank and last name. If you're main character is going to be a service member, get the facts striaght.
A good story. I agree that some of the military details are inaccurate, but that doesn’t take away from what is a hot description of what could have happened. As a retired senior NCO I know soldiers were sucking cocks because I was one of them - a cocksucker.