All Comments on 'My Asian Christmas Present'

More please it took my breath away.

I don't understand why the dialogue is all described instead of just written in quotes. I get that it's supposed to be a story related to someone else, and the sex is nice, but normal dialogue would help things flow much better.

OMG that was Hot

Hey Angel

What a story line - u have a nack to have a little twist at the end. I look forward to the next ones - SA