by AWesTexUn
Brought back many memories of great sex witha young
and willing daughter wanting to learn. We still love each other and haves ex several times a year when I travel to be with her. I tryed her mother again but Mom could not
hold a candle to my little girl.
Very well written story . Took your time and didn't rush through it (same way an older man make's love to his woman). Have no ideal what your plot (story line) will be in Part Three , But I am looking forward to it . Was hard reading Part's One & Two and do know for sure Part Three will be a knockout ! Just thinking , Maybe...she will invite her friend's back for a small party and she does him in the den or upstair's while the party's going on . Or..... His dad come's to spend the weekend . Her dad might convince her she need's alittle bit more practice . Just throwing some ideal's at ya . I'am positive you'll come up with a great Part Three ! Keep up the great work ! Good Luck
You Absolutely must continue the story. It was amazing. You combine deep insight into love and wonderfully desciptive sex-scenes. It was wonderfull
Waiting on the next chapter with intensity and craving!
Can't wait to see what CUMS next!
Please continue. I think you have something great here, that could be so much more.
Yes yes yes! Pleeease continue. And add spell check. No biggie, though. Thanks so much! Also, love the shout out to Tech. Guns Up Red Raiders!
-Scarlett
Please continue this story giving us all the detais of them fucking. You had me hard and pulling myself and shooting cum all over my hands and shooting onto my chest. I had to go to the bathroom and clean myself up.
Jim NZ
"Should I Continue?" the Author asks at the end of this chapter. FUCKING "A"!!
However theAuthor asked the question approximately FOUR YEARS AGO--and chapter 03 has not yet been written (unless it's titled differently that My Baby).
If you should elect to discontinue writing, how about latch onto a budding prospect and offer instructions, oversight, ideas, thought processes, etc.!!!!!
In both parts, there were a few typos. However, you still did a wonderful job. It is very hard to find such well-written erotica. You are very talented. Please continue this story.
Due to her inexperience, somehow, I think he's going to be a dad (& gpa) again. I don't recall... is she on birth control?