All Comments on 'My Best Friend Blake'

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redlion75redlion75over 10 years ago

so what happened to them? married with kids or one fuck and done?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Chapter 2 & more??

Please don't stop the story line here, you have a great thing started!!

Excellent writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
THANKS

Great story, sure hope you add more.

Black_Dragon_PrincessBlack_Dragon_Princessover 10 years ago
Daaaayyyyyuuuuummmmmm!!!!!!

Gimme some of that! mmHMMMMMM!!!!! DAYUM I need my man right now! this is the best thing I coulda read this early in the am! 5* hun and keep em cummin! ;3

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
*****

Five.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Short but very very hot

IronDragonIronDragonover 10 years ago
Thank you!

My wife read this one earlier and pretty much raped me... but then again, you can't rape the willing. :D

5 HUGE Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very good story

Many friends develop feelings but are afraid to act on them. It often takes a rejection or break up to bring the friends together. It is better to take a chance than regret it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very good.

Wish it was longer.

StMaartenFreakStMaartenFreakover 10 years ago

great story. you should really get an editor though. 4 stars!

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 10 years ago
Good story

Please tell me that there will be more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WOW

Wow, well that escalated quickly......

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good start

You've got two sexy people here --Blake and Skylar -- exploring each other for the first time. If Blake is this muscular and manly football player, make him a bit more mature and give him some chest hair on that great chest. Skylar can trace her fingers through a good dusting of chest hair across those manly pecs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story but...

I really enjoyed the story! It was fun and didnt drag out too long before getting to the exciting bits, but.... This thing needs a serious editing!! I gave it four stars, it would have gotten five except there were so many damned words left out of sentences or word screwups that it distracted and detracted from the story! Honestly I see so many stories on here that could be great if the authors just hadn't been lazy and had spent a few minutes reading what they had written!

...anyway, like I said,I enjoyed it so keep writing, but put the constructive criticism to good use and improve your work! :)

oldwayneoldwayneover 8 years ago
Five Stars!

I loved it...short and sweet!

GuyJDGuyJDalmost 6 years ago
Awesome

I love interracial best friends stories. This truly needs either a sequal or even a series.

Part 2 can be written as they're spending an entire night together having endless sex. After their 1st time together, she had a pregnancy scare that turned to be a false alarm. With that being learned, they have a celebration fuck.

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