by CaydenRoxxx
Please don't stop the story line here, you have a great thing started!!
Excellent writing!!
Gimme some of that! mmHMMMMMM!!!!! DAYUM I need my man right now! this is the best thing I coulda read this early in the am! 5* hun and keep em cummin! ;3
My wife read this one earlier and pretty much raped me... but then again, you can't rape the willing. :D
5 HUGE Stars!
Many friends develop feelings but are afraid to act on them. It often takes a rejection or break up to bring the friends together. It is better to take a chance than regret it.
You've got two sexy people here --Blake and Skylar -- exploring each other for the first time. If Blake is this muscular and manly football player, make him a bit more mature and give him some chest hair on that great chest. Skylar can trace her fingers through a good dusting of chest hair across those manly pecs.
I really enjoyed the story! It was fun and didnt drag out too long before getting to the exciting bits, but.... This thing needs a serious editing!! I gave it four stars, it would have gotten five except there were so many damned words left out of sentences or word screwups that it distracted and detracted from the story! Honestly I see so many stories on here that could be great if the authors just hadn't been lazy and had spent a few minutes reading what they had written!
...anyway, like I said,I enjoyed it so keep writing, but put the constructive criticism to good use and improve your work! :)
I love interracial best friends stories. This truly needs either a sequal or even a series.
Part 2 can be written as they're spending an entire night together having endless sex. After their 1st time together, she had a pregnancy scare that turned to be a false alarm. With that being learned, they have a celebration fuck.