by FerdGerfel
Yes, this was definitely up to the first one's standards, and yep you should continue. This is a good story with a bit of angst and secrecy thrown in. They certainly need to continue their threeway affair, but as to ideas for 3 and 4: Well, we already know Lisa was with two women, how about a backstory on them? Perhaps one or both were sisters. Perhaps someone he knows. And you already wrote one suggestion for the future. Get Emily to divulge what happened to change Lisa's mind. Lots of potential, so please continue.
This was a really amazing story that I really appreciated. It did not follow the story line I thought it would and I would really like another chapter
Simply outstanding. Great characters and even greater continuity. Keep them Cumming.
Oh Lord. I hate to see them angry but I love to watch them fight! And they made up in the end, quite nicely.