by TxAuthor
Thank you for re-publishing this story, it's one of my all-time favourites on LE and I was really sad to see it gone missing. But will you publish all 4 parts or maybe even add something to it?
As usual it got the well deserved 5*!
Sorry for pulling the stories earlier. I am back! I was unhappy with some of the parts so I am reimagining the Katie Series after part 2. Keep the comments coming!
This was one of the best stories I have read in a long long time!! 5 stars for sure!!!
This is truly a superb story. I was very disappointed when you removed it from Literotica. Now I'm delighted to find that you're returning it, even if it is in a new and improved form. Please don't change it much. Incidentally, more such great stories would also be well received.
Tou were sorely missed on the site! This story is great however I hope you bring back your other stories as well.
Read this years ago and came back to read again recently since I loved it so much. Was so sad not to see it, but delighted it's back and with new & improved parts! You're a very gifted author, erotica or otherwise. Keep up the great work, I'll be anxiously awaiting your new work!
Now i have to favorite it again. :-)
Do you know how i feel when I came to reread the story and haven't found it.
Any way sorry for my english
Their self discovery was brilliant. As was their awakening.
We really enjoyed this tale of young love and first sexual exploration. Now that we've discovered you, we're looking forward to reading your other stories.
As some of the others have said, this is one of the best stories I have read on Literotica! And 5 stars from me!
I loved this story because it reminds me of my friendship with a girl I've been great friends with since the second grade. And I just recently asked her out and she said yes. So thank you for this.
Great, but, good lord, how many times does she orgasm? Must be on a hair trigger.
Very nice,brought back memories
Of my teens40 plus years ago.
Delightful. Sweetly erotic, more suited to the "first time" or "romance" category. But still a five star effort.
I think you are the best write on here I've ever read. Consistently engaging and believable stories.
A delightful and well crafted story. Kudos to the author who respected us readers enough to put the polish of good editing on the piece. 6 stars!.
It’s a great story. You need to work on proof reading and some grammatical errors; but, I didn’t hold that against you. 5 stars.
First story I ever read on here years and years ago, somewhere around age 13 (I know, I know). Now, after 20 or so reads, it’s still my favorite to come back to. Without a doubt, I have modeled my life, my desires, and everything in my romantic life after this story. This story made me feel those butterflies before I even knew what they were. Truly amazing.
Never mind, I was 15. Just checked the publish date. Could have swore I was younger lol
I love coming back to this story and reading it again!
I first read it before I had an account.
Lovely premise.
Beautifully written. Beautifully structured.
Could have used more dialog during their sexual encounters.
Is this the way you like it?
Do you think about me when you masturbate? What do you imagine?
Do you like my ass? Show me how much.
Does it feel good when I play with your cock? Should I do it faster or slower?
Can you smell how excited I am? Does it smell good? Would you like to taste me?
Four stars, verging on five.