by CallMeKitten09
Love it...it was so pure and authentic...got my own pussy soaking as they explored each other...but it was such pure love between them...very beautiful and I love the back and forth for differing perspectives on what was happening!!
This story was so good. I loved how you switched people to show different perspectives on the events. Please make more.
Your writing is simple, emotional, empathetic & so real that Kristen & Alice just pop off the page & become vivacious & deeply complex characters. Such a beautiful narrative & backstory woven with precision & love. This was a beautiful read & I am eagerly looking forward to more stories from you. Oh, you write great sex scenes too, & your dialogue is wonderful.