All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Dad'

Wonderful written! Hot, sexy and even believable.

Hoping to see more of your submissions - keep 'em coming.

That was so hot. I loved the teasing of it, how they didn't actually touch, and yet had a firey encounter. Nice work.

Good story and well told. I hope you have a sequel in mind as the story situation seems to demand it. My only criticisms concern sentence flow. Here's an example:

"The moment broken, Rick grabbed the remote and flipped the channel; the threesome disappeared, replaced with a late night infomercial for an exercise machine. He wiped at his cock with the towel, then tossed it in the corner and put his dick away, while I jumped up and pulled my shorts back around my waist, then high-tailed it back to the guest room."

Here's my edit:

"The moment broken, Rick stabbed the TV remote and the porn was replaced by an infomercial. He wiped his cock and threw the towel in the corner. I jumped off the couch while pulling up my shorts and quietly hightailed it back to the guest room."

Just my suggestions. You are writing hot stuff! Keep at it!

Well done, good character build up to a brilliant ending.

I hope we will hear more from you.

Superb story and writing. Lots more and soon.

Really enjoyed your first story! Looking forward to seeing more!

Loved the story and wished it was longer but a continuing series would be great.

Brilliant start, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Awesome and very sexy.

Gave it a 4 star!!! can't wait to read the next instalment to give it a 5 star

That was a Great story. I loved how it progressed

And came together for Taylor to get some

Of what she wanted. Not to much but still a

Satisfying fort time. And eagerly waiting for

A second time. Thanks.

Well written, good, easy flowing style.

A fine, fun read. Hot enough to steam up my glasses at least four times.

Damn that was good read ;)