by _Kushiel_
are they ever going to have a real romance... she keeps calling him Mr. P or Becky's dad. It's getting kinda of weird... Reality has to hit them sooner or later.
I'm wondering if this is a romance, it's starting to feel weird, just seems like all there is between them is sex, does she even know what his first name is, if they are so in love, I would have thought she'd use his name, not Mr P or Becky's dad or sir all the time.
Arguably, it might be better identified as "light discipline" (okay, so that's not a Lit category), but regardless, the story is being thoroughly entertaining. I am hoping that the relationship(s) with Becky will get resolved. Nice work!
what boring drivel need to spice this shit up we get it he seduced her she will do anything, anytime he wants. but it's boring get her eat the sales clerk force to fuck some one else prove her love to him.
I logged on this morning to a new chapter posted and thought YAY!! Thanks, it made my day. It was slightly different to the others, being a little slower paced but just as hot and I enjoyed it immensely. I too hope to see a reconciliation with Becky for both their sakes. But I do realise that its still only early days so I'm looking forward to that eventuality, it means there's still more to come.
There's a few negative comments on here alreay, but I wouldn't worry about them and ignore them out of turn. It just goes to show that they don't read, retain or comprehend the story very well, as all their comments have been addressed in this, or a previous chapters. I notice that you've even addressed the issue of 'Romance' and placed this newest chapter in Erotic Couplings' - Personally I don't honestly care which category it goes in as long as you continue.
Thanks for a great read!
CAN THEY FIND SUMTHING BETTER TO DO THAN HAVE SEX LETS GET TO THE REAL SHIT LIKE HER ENDING UP PREGO OR SUMTHING AND HER EX BEST FRIEND FIND OUT OR HER SLEPING WIT HER DAD SOME SHIT LIKE THAT ANY THING BESIDE THEM FUCKING LIKE RABBITS ALL THE TYME AND WHAT HAPPEN TO THEM USEING CONDOMS
I only come to this website to read your stories because you are by far the best:)
More of a stroke story. I like to read with more than one hand.
I read your series on lusty library, really happy you continued it. Its one of my favorite series. Love it!
I presume there will be additional chapters, though not really needed, as it could stop right here and be adequate. I still like your style and still find that intimacy is far more intimate between two people with history... after all, how much affection is generated in an evening, a week, a month? For some reason, "Uncle Joe" revved me up a bit more, though I confess that dancing along the edge of D/s held my interest pretty well. <smile>
Thanks for treating us.
Sincerely,
-Wylde
I really enjoyed the story thus far, and I hope that you will continue. It's sexy and well written, my two favorite things!
I am hanging on the edge to find out what could happen I enjoy reading your stories they are well written
This story is my favorite on the whole site. PLEASE finish the story, I really want to know what happens with Becky and with Misha and Ericka!
I have been waiting forever and ever for the next chapter! Please don't stop writing. I just need to know what happens next.
Please keep writing.....I NEED to know what happens next!!!
Ignore any negative comments... I love your stories... especially this one... more please.
Oh no, it's no more chapters! I want more of this series, you're writing is amazing and this was an amazing series, I want to see were this ends.
omg that was the end...well I feel cheated 😔 I'm assuming after 10 years there is probably no conclusion coming- didn't need to much more just tie up loose ends, I guess I'll have to go imagine my own ending...
More would have made this a much better series. I agree with others this series just left us hanging.