All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Girl'

This is NOT romance!

Not really romance. But, this seems incomplete as if it is not the end of the story. As it stands, it probably would have fit better into the erotic coupling category.

Hi other commenters/readers - thanks for the feedback! I've requested the change of category, so should be changed soon. I'm also working on a follow up to this piece, so keep your eyes peeled! Thanks!

Your writing is good. Keep going

I hope your working on a part 2 for this one

Yeah, good luck getting Laurel to do anything, I've been reporting a story as plagiarised for over a week, yet it is still there and the writer was able to post chapter 2 of a plagiarised story after chapter 1 was reported. If this was in Erotic Couplings I would have scored it better, as it is I come to romance for romance, not this. 3*

As opposed to the other 1am...?

Also, some RIDICULOUSLY long paragraphs make this a somewhat awkward read.

Ignore the sad sops that can't bear more than five words getting in the way of their tossing off. They rest of us greatly enjoyed your story telling. Please continue.

Sometimes overpowers morals, too.