All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Girl Ch. 01'

I think you've captured a quintessential experience growing up. I know I had something like this happen. I look forward to more of your wriring!

am i missing something here or did i just read a 1/2 of a story..? is there more to follow.? is this the end of the story.? am i just dreaming or is this real.?

Wow..!!!! i gave it a "3" as i don't even know what is going on ! oh well.**

I would have assumed me putting "Ch. 01" in the title would have let you know that this wasn't the end of the story. It is the first chapter in a longer series. I'm sorry if this confused anyone else, but I assumed that it was pretty clear.

It "ended" suddenly, so I scrolled back up to be sure. It IS an odd place to change chapters, but it does leave quite a bit of anticipation.

worst story i ever read, sounded like a chick flick...yuk!

You left us all hanging. Otherwise quite enjoyable.