by trixieadara
Very erotic, and you've done a good job establishing the characters. I look forward to reading the other chapters.
Head's up if you like this fic until CHAPTER 10, stop at chapter 10.
It's just bad after that. I am sad to not have known this.
Excellent bit of storytelling.
The inevitability of everything was felt from the start and that gave the story momentum and a sense of helplessness by way of an observer who is clearly doomed.