All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Girlfriend Ch. 01'

by trixieadara

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Oh fuck!

I sure hope you continue this REAL SOON!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fantastic

Please keep this story going; great start and thanks for posting

Bob_AganoushBob_Aganoushover 6 years ago
Excellent start

Very erotic, and you've done a good job establishing the characters. I look forward to reading the other chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Head's up if you like this fic until CHAPTER 10, stop at chapter 10.

It's just bad after that. I am sad to not have known this.

HeartfeltmanHeartfeltman4 months ago

Excellent bit of storytelling.

The inevitability of everything was felt from the start and that gave the story momentum and a sense of helplessness by way of an observer who is clearly doomed.

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My name is Trixie Adara. I write erotica, almost exclusively lesbian erotica. I prefer mind control stories or any story with an element of the supernatural. However, I also love the slow build and an element of realism to my stories. If you love my work, please check out my...