All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Girlfriend'

Very well written! Left me wanting to this storyline. Excuse me while I milk the one eyed snake to relive the family jewels.

I’m sure there are more mistakes; I just lost interest after the first few. Was Sandy’s interest peaked or was it perhaps, “piqued?”

After the first hand of poker, Sandy “did the little bra removal dance” but then at the beginning of the fifth hand, “Sandy was down to just her bra and t-shirt.” Clothing items are coming and going without explanation, because after the blow job, you removed her panties “to return the favor.” So just how was she dressed at each stage of the game?

What about “Sandy's bear breasts?” I don’t think I have ever seen a girl with breast like a bear. I can’t imagine that as being very attractive. I have seen quite a few bare breasts, meaning they were uncovered or exposed.

Proof read – proof read – proof read and then get a friend (if you have one) to proof read for you several times.

enjoyed your story, liked the slow buildup, love a good strip poker story. just the right length too!

Too many mistakes. I ditched after the "bear breasts." On top of that, the situation just played as too contrived.

Yes, there were mistakes; yes, there's some strong dialogue and description here. Kinda evens out. Wish he'd actually come inside her, though: nothing quite like that rush in a tight pussy.

This story proves you do not even have to know the English language to get a high rating from some readers, as long as you provide “get off” sex. Is it “peak” or “pique?” Were the breast “bear” or “bare?” Gotta go now; must burn my dictionary while I choke my chicken.

I had my gf give my friend head today she sucked both are cocks