by sjalv91
I got tired of having to ADD words where you left them missing in sentences. 1*
I loved the story... Except where she says she's not a feminist.
Feminist just means that you believe men and women are equal.
"I'm not a feminist" is a pretty idiotic thing for anyone, but particularly a character like Kate, to say.
Absolutely loved the story! Sure grammatical errors exist but their chemistry is electric. Can't wait to hear more from them!
Hated the tone and style of storytelling. Add to that idiotic things like "I'm not a feminist." Ugh. What a slog of a read.