by rilysilywily
Damn, this was a lot better than I expected! Sure there wasn't much actual incest but the premise and the possibility of future escapades is enormous. You just have to write more in this series, after all there are so many more possible combinations they have to try out and make it a real "Keep it in the family" thing.
5*+++
Just a suggestion, A little more building of sexual tension between characters might help. Not just X wants to fuck you. A little teasing goes a long way to improving the actual sex.
Just my opinion. You'll get lots of those. Your feedback s ores will be your guide.
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Hoped daughters would suck and be sucked by their Moms, but HOPED daughters would enjoy their own Dads as well..... just seemed the natural progression... no??
I know it was lesbian and incest orientated, BUT since Dad's fucked the others' daughters, and the others' wives....it just made sense.... LOL
Can't wait for next instalment where each dad fucks his own daughter, keep this story going for 1more chapter it is hot and. Horny. Can't wait to hear that all 4 women end up being pregnant at the same time. Each mom pregnant by the friends dad and each daughter by their own dad
I'm with Leenysman. Mix it up, 3-ways, four-ways, pull some trains. Maybe add more families, hell, there's lots of them out there. 5 stars, fave story, love your writing, please give us more.
Best regards, max052
Pussies NEED hair, even neatly trimmed, for many reasons:
1) I want to know I'm fucking a WOMAN, not a prepubescent teen.
2) A shaved pussy is like a beautiful painting without a frame to call attention to it.
3) Properly stimulated, a woman is well lubricated before being undressed. Her pubic tresses will hold some of her juice that will add to the flavor, and excitement to me, as she is licked.
4) To me, a shaved cunt, even with a "landing strip," is a turnoff.
Plus many more reasons.
I loved the characters. Story was what I enjoy reading when private pleasures are mine to be taken.
That hairy bush really made for a better story in my onion.
Madison Avenue advertising sell an idea of depilation being sexy and cool but truth is I want to know the woman I am with is mature enough to be in bed with me. Well, physically mature enough to be fucking because immaturity as a human takes longer for some people to get beyond.
This it truly a family I would love to join! I'm sure the rest of your stories will be as equally erotic!