All Comments on 'My Bi Adventure'

I like the way you told your story and enjoyed the details you presented. I love the subject matter as well! However- there were numerous mis-spellings and a few errors that a good editor might catch and correct for you. I'd suggest finding someone to read and tweak your work before posting.. otherwise.. nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

Great how all three are enjoying each other. Please post a second part.

Nice job, keep it up and we won't have any trouble keeping it up either!