by Ahabscribe
Best story I have read on here in a very long time. Look forward to part 2 sometime soon I hope...
Best story of the year, maybe several years.
fuck me running...i loved this story!...kinda reminded me of my life in the beginning...although incest is not my thing, i found myself getting soaking wet...i'm a vouyer at heart and if i had a young stud by my side i would have rode him till he begged me to stop!
Had to read it twice. It was that good, Kept me hard for hours just picturing the whole show.
One of the best I've ever read, and I've read plenty. What a sexy, warm-hearted story. Simply magnificent, I'm soaking now!
- Hazel
very hot stuff, exciting and stimulating. Keep up the great work :)
I love this story. Any chance of it being continued? It made me want to climb on my bike and find a rally right now.
A different take on this subject and a good one. Please write a part #2.
Now THAT was wild! Hell of a ride, and hotter than hell. Smack down fantasy at it's very nastiest.
Absolutely brilliant piece of writing. I am working my way through all your stories as they are so good. More power to your pen. Tear all the hypocrisy down, I think most men would admit to having a thing for their mothers - it aint sick, it's human nature.
Well written stuff but this is one in a huge line of stories where the author doesn't understand bra sizes. 48EE means the mother has big tits but is also grossly overweight. It makes the reader stop and lose the flow in the same way that a grammatical error does.
I used to ride myself before eye problems forced me to stop and I have been to a few rallies that were so close to what you described it vould have been any one of them....
You oughta consider writing for a living... pretty accurate depiction of a rally, too.
Yes, it could have been longer but I liked it very much. Thank you for writing.
I loved this one. Got me very wet and very naked. Earl Browder has a biker story as well, with his grandmom. Its a very good one too. If you haven't read it too i recommend it. Anyway, I really liked this one and will continue working my way through your list.
Loved it!! My Mom was a red head, stacked, & Very HOT!
As I read this I couldn't help thinking of what a wonderful Mother I had!
I really like your work. Thank You for sharing your storys with us.
Will there be a #2 too this one?? Please.
Very hot story! I have a thing for biker chicks! Include boots next time! lol
Hello there, A great story for sure.
One hot looking lady+a guy+ a bike
= a great time.
Yeah the old man was a real dick,
glad you gave his grave the respect he
so well deserved.
Yup Mom was a sweetie, glad you made
her so happy!
You did a great job of combining a mom/son and father/ daughter story and actually making it hot and worth reading again
One of the best I've read recently! Not only mother-son but a worked in a hot father-daughter story and great woman on woman action....all three scenarios my favorites!!! About the only thing that would have made the ending better? Having both women pregnant in the December pinup by their respective "husbands"...that way mommy would have gotten her wish of having a grand baby!
I love your stuff! Always wanted to take my Momma to a rally with me, but she never would go. She was hot! Short with brown hair and muscular legs. She grew up on a farm and had always known hard work, so her muscles were well-defined. B-cup breasts that remained perky until her death. Just a little extra weight. Enough to give her the curves she knew I loved so well. Love this story. Unlike others I am not necessarily a fan of obligatory pregnancy in an incest story, so this is fine. Think about it. If Momma here is over forty when they first attend the biker rally and she got pregnant that very night, she would be probably over 60 when the fruit of her loins graduated high school. So I think skipping procreation is ok here. Maybe if she were younger. Write more like this.
I reread this story to refresh my memory about why I had it on my favorite list, The second time through it was obvious. I regret that it had enough errors that I would have to rate it as a 'second draft' and not a finished story:
Mom (mom) (87)
Mom’s (mom’s) (20)
Old Man (old man) (6)
Old Man’s (old man’s)
Motorcycle (motorcycle)
(-morning) at 8:00 A.M. (AS OPPOSED TO WHAT 8:00 AM IN THE EVENING????)
less clothes (fewer)
world class (world-class)
road side (roadside)
Mid afternoon (midafternoon)
biker's rally (bikers’)
bi-sexual (bisexual)
tube tope (top)
sale-persons (salespersons)
Pin-up (pin-up)
Santa Clause (Claus)
No don't like sharing thought this was like a love story totally not what I expected sigh...
When MOM came out of her shell, all hell
broke loose, and she got her groove on.
JOHN now had a fuck buddy forever.
good story,well done, easy read.
...THANKS... OH!! YA!!! 5*****+
(8/19/2021)
This story was a deep pit of hedonism, depravity, debauchery, and quite an enjoyable read indeed. This narrative goes right on my favorites list. Well done my good author. I'm embarrassed to only be able to give you 5 stars. This story was so F**king HOT!!! Gee,...I,..I,...I had a bike once... I actually road it From NY to Florida and back. :(
Maybe mixing with a few more people could work but this is a hot story just as it is. Mom and son, big tits, big cock, hot time!
Ah, Mommy love (or Daddy love) is the best. Great story! I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memory?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Mother and Son incest stories are my favorite. The only problem is when they're together they still address each other as Mom or Mother and Son. Since the stories are filled with compassion and love I'd prefer them using words of endearment such as "Honey or Sweetheart." It makes the story line between them more compassionate.
Would love a part #2 describing the wedding - including how the brides are marked to show their devotion to their "husband" Masters.
You have never switched partners if he truly loved her he wouldn't have fucked the other girl and if she truly loved him she wouldn't have fucked the other guy them doing that cost any chance of the relationship working out for she's going to spend more time fucking the girl and other guy then him to where eventually she just stops fucking him all together that is what happens in real life when you allow another man to fuck your woman and same goes when the woman allows another girl to fuck her man that is why a real man wouldn't allow that shit and real woman wouldn't either
Mfkndragon is right if they truly loved each other they would have never switched partners so don't hand me that love crap