All Comments on 'My Birthday Gift'

score it as drunk sex is to me Meaningless

Call it risky, but I just emailed the link to this story to my sister. My birthday is coming up. Hope to goodness she gets the hint!! We've come close a few times. Great story...

Great story but terrible grammer which does spoil it . Get a proofreader .

With the boyfriend cumming to get sloppy seconds. Wonder if little brother will get a chance for his in the future. Needs a second chapter as well as some spellchecking.

don't steal other writers stories and rewrite them as your own this needs to be deleted hornet could sue you for plagerism use your head for once. even if this wasn't plagerised it was very poorly written and never should have been posted. are you ten or a grade school drop out?

it woulda been funny if that wasnt the present

Not very good to begin with but spoiled by the mawkish baby nonsense.