All Comments on 'My Birthday Present Ch. 02'

Loved it cant wait for more

This the kind of sister every boy should have. Ben's a big strong lad. At his age he's got to blow his young balls all the time, and it's so damn easy, convenient, and just fucking exciting for him to unload his brotherly balls in his sweet sister's warm wet mouth and fill it with his creamy semen. Now sis's got another warm wet place--a much, much better place--in mind for Ben to shoot his sperm. Go, girl, go!

...was just a rewrite of chapter one, substituting 'he' for 'she' and 'him' for 'her'. Would like to have seen more of a difference in perspectives.

A longer chapter three would be welcomed, just mix it up a bit, eh?

Marvin

Like the way you write...waiting for chapter 3!

You've set the hook, now you have to reel it in. What happened on the ride home was just a down payment on his birthday present. Now you have to have her finish giving him what was promised, and teach him how to satisfy his sister at the same time. Who knows, maybe by the time her birthday comes around he would be ready, willing and able to reciprocat with a similar gift.

Yes, at least finish up. Which of the options will you choose??

Great writing - just the right build-up, and a great teaser...

also, fyi - discreet, not discrete -- http://grammarist.com/usage/discrete-discreet/

Excellent second part. You have set the story up nicely for more editions. Great writing again.

if I was her I take him to nearest motel strip him as I strip too and tell him make love to me till we are dry. I do not want no one else to make love to me as long as I live but you my dear brother and you better leave it in every time you squirt. and if I get pregnant so be it baby is how we show love for each other as lovers and brother and sister

Good story continue it.

Yes, she has started something and has to finish it. She gave him a blowjob of sorts and swallowed his cum; now she wants them to screw etc. Hopefully, she'll do him really well but even with him being her little brother; he may really be a big brother who is a hunk to boot !! Cannot wait for chapter 4 ........ thanks.

Ahh, life is a puzzle, is it not?