All Comments on 'My Blonde Pixie'

Poor spelling and grammar make this ok story a chore to read.

A tough read because of the many grammatical errors here.

collage college

worm warm

............ and on and on.

Too many of the wrong words.

Words are the tools a writer uses, any craftsman will tell you that you get poor results from using the wrong tools.

I do understand that my illiteracy effects my writing. This is a sample to be revised upon getting an editor that will help. I hope that with my imagination and experience with out side grammatical help, I will be able to provide quality stories that make the mind lust for more.

I think that your story is pretty good, and as for the spelling and grammar I'm unusually neat about my own in things I have to write for College so I don't mind the mistakes of others. Seeing as how this gonna be 2 years old in the fall I just wonder are you okay man or are you taking the slow and steady route for the sequel?