All Comments on 'My Blue Pill with Green Eyes Ch. 03'

Great story. Waiting for more

Great series. Alway excited when I see a new chapter show up. Know I'm in for a great read. Please keep it up.

The story is wonderful and I had tears flowing in parts. Please continue.

Great story please write more

There is much more to this story, or should I say novel, than just pure unadulterated sex. The grammar, wording and character building is just phenomenal. I look forward to reading more!

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks

There, I finally said it. I have enjoyed it very much over the first 2 chapters, but since it was posted for erotic couplings I feared the worst. Even though chapter 3 contained significant sadness it ended beautifully.

This is the first time I have read something here that has left me crying. Seriously great story, grammar and mechanics are perfect, VERY much looking forward to more chapters and also more stories from you! Reading your story is my treat to myself after busy days of work and grad school.

Great Story I am looking forward to more. Please keep the chapters coming.

When are you gonna post c4?

I just read the first 3 of this series and can't wait for chapter 4.

Thoroughly enjoyed chapters 1 through 3 .... where's #4??

I cried. Very well written. (But seriously microwaving the steaks?)

I just love this story, what upsets me it has been more than three years since its posting and no chapter 4 yet. Yet 5+++stars on this story so far.

Absolutely loved the story! Hopefully all is well with you, I’d love to read the rest of the story! So much love and respect for Jo! Thanks!

Mate, you gotta get this finished!!