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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good plot but needs editing

Better spelling---Shorter paragraphs ---- More attention to detail

Good Luck

jo_greeneyesjo_greeneyesalmost 18 years ago
Wonderful

Absolutely fantastic,

I am beginning to wonder what is in store, in the future, I can hardly wait.

You are an inimitable writer, I too hate those crude words totally uneccessary, and spoils the mood, for me anyway,

Please keep them coming.

Jo

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

an amazing story

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