All Comments on 'My Body Lies'

A most enjoyable story in every way - thank you for posting it for us. You wrote: ... I know soon there will be more. Much more.

I certainly hope there will be and that you will tell us all about it.

Very well done.

This was fantastic!! Please write more, you seem to know it so well that it is completely believeable!!

You really let yourself go with this story - in quite an explosive way! I suspect that you had to stop to relieve yourself several times whilst writing it. It was a brutal rush and I can't understand why people scored it lower than your first story. Five stars for me!

Summore