All Comments on 'My Boss'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
more?

Great story, please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not too bad in all

Not bad, but too short. Be more descriptive. Also, use a spell checker next time too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great story but lot of spelling mistakes

It is a great story, I wish it were longer and more descriptive. Hopefully there is a sequil, but please check your spelling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
liked it

Good but needed more flesh to it , more build up

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