All Comments on 'My Boss & His Wife'

Badly written, not at all interesting. More work needed man...

I have to thank you for posting this in the first place, because without authors this site wouldn't exist.However, I personally didn't care for this story at all. To me, it was far more odd and confusing than it was erotic or exciting. The Druid hood outfits, the boss with the shaven head and a goatee, the eye contact between the two men... Add to that the utter lack of background information or buildup before the sex itself, and it was all just too weird for my tastes.

Don't give up your day job, this was one of the worst i have read here.