All Comments on 'My Boy Pt. 05'

Okay this series of yours is the only gay series that I read. Mostly cause I fell a little in love with Mike & Jesse. I felt so bad for the way Mike was treated by his family that at some point he became my favorite of the two. Jesse is showing himself to be a truly spoiled and selfish jerk. At some point I hope you address how badly Claire is being treated since she's a pretty important part of this whole story now. Mike seems to be a little infatuated with her cause she's the only one that makes him blush & he used to like girls. I hope you go crazy with the storyline & let Mike & Claire fall in love and run off together. Hell they're the only two that deserve a happily ever after so why not let them have it together? They would be great together and Mike deserves Claire.

I love this story, I hate how Michael is getting treated. I really hate Jesse. I hope everything good he has going gets ruined. I want Michael to have a happily ever after he deserves it.

Jesse is such a jerk. Mike needs to move on and find someone else. Glad you revived this story

Oh my gosh this story is fantastic. Please don't let it take you this long to post again. Please write soon.

next chapter please. love this story

NEED.PART.6.NOWW

I love this story but am beginning to lose interest in reading more because Mike is being written as if he has no backbone whatsoever. His desperation is starting to become an unsexy factor. I personally vote for Mike ending up with Daniel and Daniel being an amazing boyfriend to Mike, all the while Jesse sees and knows this and it drives him crazy but there being nothing he can do about it. The end. At this point if Jesse and Mike wind up together after everything Jesse has said and done, I personally would call bullshit. That's just mt two cents though.

Nice... Please write in longer version. It's simple good, how you express emotions.

I love this story and I can not wait for the next chapter, please update soon, I wanna know what's going to happen.

This story has ruined me lmao! I've read it all in one night and I'm so upset at the lie you have no idea.. I don't even know what I hope for anymore, as I feel it might be too late for the lie to be a lie, but I'm such a sucker for brothers in love that I can't stop hoping. Please update soon!

I absolutely adore this story (read this and Brothers during the last 24 hours) and the sex is hot but what the hell is happening to Michael and Jessie? Michael completely lost his back bone and is just so weak and desperate all of a sudden. And Jessie is a real douche. I'm no sucker for romance and happy endings but what happened that made Jessie treat his brother like garbage? Can't wait for the next chapter.

I really hope the next part is longer! <3

Who is Jason? I feel lost cause I don't remember who he is lol

It seems lovely old Dad rubbed off on him ...

What a disgusting, sick jerk he is, treating his brother like that ...

And why does Michael allow himself to be treated like a whore ??

Now Jason knows - HOW DOES HE KNOW ? Will he blackmail them ?

I'm dying over here! 😂😂😂😂

Where is the next part?

Am I the only one who checks back everyday to see if he has posted the next story?? LOL

I literally rush this story and Brothers during the week end ! I'm not even english but i feel so attached to this story and i feel sad for michael... at this point i don't even know if he and jesse will ever find love and real happines together on day... congratulation WoelsMe xD you got my feeling with this story and the total suspence... like many others poor sad souls now lol

Good luck for the next chapters, i can't wait and i love your writing style! Don't mind stupid people ;)

This whole series overall is great. The way Michael lets himself get manipulated like that makes me so mad! I really wish that he would kick Jesses ass lol

I NEED THE NEXT PART IM GONNA CRY OMF

It can't end here. Please it is getting frustrating.

PLEASE TELL ME I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO MICHAEL I'M SO FUCKIN INTRIGUED

oh god it is great.

want to read the next part don't leave us in this hangover.

want to read the next part,can't wait.

i want that danial and mike have some quick fling with themselves and seeing this jesse becomes jeolous and restless.

this way mike could atleast give jesse some way to feel guilt and restlessness seeing mike and danial having intimacy,atleast fake intimacy from mike's side.

I hope you update soon! absolutely love this!❤

But I was super pissed. I read the Brithers 12 part and this My Boy 5 part all in one night. I bawled my eyes out. It's 230 in the morning. And Jesse is a fucking retarded ratchet evil person. So...3/5 stars is what it gets!!! I want more but I'm still fucking pissed! Shit!

I request you to update the story as soon as possible

Reading this sequel brought the lyrics of that Alan Parsons song to mind:

"And the game never ends when your whole world depends on the turn of a friendly card"

Mike is gambling and so, so fragile in Part 5. He's left his fate in the hands of his brother who has proven deceitful beyond measure. (Unless another twist leads us to new revelations...)

This is such good writing, and the events of this sequel very unexpected.

I hope the author continues with this. I'm very interested to see what happens next.

I really love your story i spent the whole day reading it. I liked how the story was going but when i saw the date, i guessed it's pretty late. It's been 9 months since you were online, i wish you could continue the series. I loved the story i smiled and cried but i was disappointed by the ending.

I just can't get over how Jesse is using him it makes me sick!

Would love to hear what you have planned next for the brothers.

Please, please, please don't leave us hanging!

Please tell me there's going to be a part 6.

I’m SO NAUSEOUS! “I can pretend! I’m a good actor!” He SURE THE FUCK IS!!! I’m SICK!!! HOW could Michal be So SPINELESS!?! He NEVER WAS BEFORE! Yes he’s SO IN LOVE BUT The Prick that you’ve named Jesse ISN’T!!!! NOT WITH HIM!!!! I’m in TEARS and SO TWISTED UP! DAMN IT!!! God I WANNA be with Michael and show that PRICK that I! ME! I’VE GOT THE GOLDEN TICKET THAT IS MICHAEL AND HE CAN FUCK OFF!!! GOOOOOOD!!! DAAAAMN!!! ITTTT!!!!

How can you do this to me!!!! I spend the whole fucking day reading their story. Aaaaa. It was a perfect couple. A bit of magic back in my life. I've never felt so alive in 7 years and you destroy it. Well :( maybe that's how things go in real life :/ that's why I'm here at a porn page being pathetic instead of out there since a boy broke my heart like Mike's.