by shaketramp17
More please, very descriptive and to the point. Just what I like. 5*
Luke just took off with a girl, yet he comes home in time to see Serena and his sister?
I was hoping to read where her ex boyfriend walks in on them, just to read what he though of it
Great story! I hope they can develop a relationship and see the complications it causes
Anon has a point, if Luke walks into his sister's room, then most likely nothing happened between Luke and the MC's best friend when he got in her car.
Please update. I want to see what happens next!
5 stars great work
Keep it up
Loved it but too abrupt an ending. Boyfriend needed to be chastised before being told to get out.
Earth shattering organisms? Damn that auto spell check!
I agree with the previous commenter: it wasn't really a story, just an abruptly- ended episode.
Boyfriend/brother needs to be forced to watch as the girls 69 enthusiastically & his ex-GF has another earth-shattering orgasm, that he could never provide!
It wasn't the orgasms it was the cheating. Furthermore, the sister has been takes advantage of but we are suppose look that over because she was into it (allegedly).
It is these kind of stories that give women like (Gayle Newman) bad ideas.
What makes her better than her BF? She becomes a cheater just like him! So, away with the moral references. She's just as much a slut as her BF. And for the sister: If you have a sister like that, you don't need enemies!
Bra, what is the revenge again? Seeing your sister enjoying your sloppy seconds. It's kinda kink that his sister wants to put her mouth and tongue all over places her brother nutted. I'd kind of be proud actually. 😁
Well she didn't really get revenge the revenge aspect would have been better served if she would have fucked the sister before she broke up with the boyfriend and the story had no build up at all it was wam bam and done the ending was trash as the entire story was
Somehow I can't see the jerk storming into his sister's room. I hope that the girls become a steady thing.