All Comments on 'My Brother Broke Me'

Definitely a Spector_Dugan! Good story and a hot sex romp. Like your stories keep the fantasies coming. Look forward to your posts.

5stars

Cheers

SAGE

Thank you author. Such a fun story.

Wow hot sexy story of sibling romance. I hope you write some more to this wonderful story. I wonder if they will move in together and make more babies as a loving couple.

I loved this story I know you probably hear this a lot because I've read it a lot in the comments on other stories and didn't think I would ever have the courage to admit this but my little sister and I started having sex when she was 16 and I was 17 that was 25 yrs ago and now we have 3 children and all are the picture of health and I wouldn't change one thing we love each other and live as husband and wife we moved to a new city where no one knows us and we are living our dream life our youngest daughter is 9 yrs old and she has 2 older brothers 11 and 13 and later when they're older if they fall in love with each other I will accept it the way our family did again thanks for your story

Great story, although from the title I was expecting more non-consent and coercion. 5*s

Nice work, as usual.

Sure, we know the injured family member routine, but these characters seen a lot more real than the well-used plot device deserves.

Just fantastic! Oh , and WOW!

LOVED IT

This author could write in any section of Literotica. I'm glad he did it here, dunno about the whimsical ending but positive attributes listed above mute that minimal misgiving.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

Just another Great story form you. I like all of your writings, and this one is right on par. You do need to add a few more chapters with the birth, mom and dads thoughts and how this brother, sister and child move on in life and somethings about life down the road for all of this family A reader from Florida Thanks

Nice story - 5*

Outstanding! Really, really hot, and really really sweet!

I'm so glad Cass and Gavin made their connection! Loved their descriptions --his chest lightly covered in brown hair, his sizable cock penetrating her, her breasts tickling his chest hair, their lovemaking and subsequent pregnancy. Love a man with a bit of chest hair! Sexy! They are becoming a loving couple. Please write more about them, and include more detail. Lovable!

Very nice, though I wish it were a bit longer. Had a great build up but the ending seemed a bit rushed.

as Cass’ pregnancy progresses? I liked this story, as I’m a big fan of little lemons. It might have been nice to have more description of the hundreds of incidents between the two. Did the roommate know they were related? Perhaps have had the loving brother being “responsible”, wearing a condom and have it break one time when love making shifted into hard fucking?

No matter however. A nice story with funny internal dialogue and sibling repartee. Keep up the good work!

Fabulously written erotic story.

Wonderful character development and emotional exploration.

And of course totally erotic

Brilliant

Fantastic story.....More... More... More chapters , Please asap

Great character build up and hopefully the foundation for future chapters.

please add some more chapters

If you check my comment history on your stories you will see I’ve probably been asking you for sequels to them all and this is no different it’s another 5 star story which I want a series from but probably won’t get unfortunately.

OH GOD - that was hot, AF!

Unlike 90% of your commentors, I think this was a perfect spot to leave it.

Half the beauty of the best stories on this site is leaving something open to your imagination for the characters' futures. Plus, I think you wrapped it up nicely. She's pregnant with her brother's baby and they're obviously planning on spending their lives together, very much in love. Anything beyond this just becomes a drawn out taboo romance novel.

Excellent story though, even if it was one of the more stereotypical tropes. I actually like this trope, though, so it works doubly for me.

What does this mean?

"As a published Lit writer, I'm contractually obligated to share a 'bro takes care of injured sis' story. This fulfills that requirement."

Thoroughly well written and a joy to read!

Interesting that a girl that was so into masturbation would have a purity ring, but still a good read.

Okie... Well first, Amazing. Fucking. Sorry. :)

Just a really great story that was so damned believable and honest! I was really surprised, I guess I've been on a roll of ok stories with a lot of hot sex, mixed with bad stories with unbelievable sex, hehe!

My nitpicky bits: well first, it seems to have caught that disease that's goes around on Literotica, you know, the one that authors catch that makes them unable to know where the hymen is at. Yep, that one!! Lol. I'm sure someone else will expound on it, so I'll leave it alone with the humor ;)

... Hmm, what else... Oh. Him just burying it and shooting his whole load without pulling out and pushing back in between shots just seemed kinda weird! Maybe some guys are like that? I can't imagine doing that!! Pulling back and driving back in, even if only a short distance, is like adding extra lightning strikes of pleasure to keep the orgasm going for those few extra precious seconds!

... But him going limp, and shrinking out right away, I don't think so!! Hell, I'm over fifty and I don't do that!! At his age he could probably keep slowly stroking and pick right back up after his sensitivity eased of, hehe!! ... Ah, to be in my twenties again!!

I agree with one of the posters below though, I think, personally, that the story ended at a perfect place! I agree with the reasoning too, I really enjoy using my imagination to play out different future endings for stories. Continuing the story might be entertaining, but it would be like a great TV show finishing the story with a great climax at the end of the season, but the producers want to milk the ratings for every penny they can ride out of it, so they write another season with filler plots, bringing in a cute kid mid season to prop up the then flagging ratings. Hehehe!! (How many sitcoms did they do that in?!)

Oh, I was interestingly surprised that she chose to wear a purity ring herself, so often it seems that it's their Church pushing the idea, or the parents. (Reminds me of some creepy dad/church/wedding story I read somewhere!)

This is my first story of yours, so looking forward to digging into your other stuff!! Itadakimas!!

Adorable :)

Good One. The Final part was a rush. Would be more sexy, if it had more chapters for at least 4 parts. But 5 Stars from me.

Great story 5/5

One of my favorite takes on the "injured sister" subgenre. I was surprised by how effective and non-annoying the use of religion was in this story.

Absolutely beautiful story. Well written and enjoyable!

Wonderful story, should be continued. Well done 5 stars

You write really good erotica, with thought and feelings.

another author that doesn't know where the hymen is located!!! idiot

Well paced and well written. Well done!

Great storyline until the disappointing ending

One of the best incest stories I've ever read. Well thought out, and not all crazy, like most are. It sounds like something I could see actually happening to two people who love each other.

I think this was my favorite story from you so far! This was honestly rather wholesome and fluffy and the smut wasn't bad either, tho not as intense :P Rather realistic to if I am being honest :3

Masterful, yet again. Spector_Dugan is a force to be reckoned with. My only regret is it took me so long to discover this writer. Professional and detailed, his works have a power unto themselves. I particularly liked the fear of pregnancy and then impregnation in this story! Keep up the great work, sir!

Nice

A very nice story of a naive sister and a loving brother.

Do you have another chapter?

College. Motherhood, best friend, and others, what next?

One of my favorite stories from now on......it's very good with emotions,writing,plot, details,love,not artificial things only natural things....I love it with my heart and want to explore more like this

Great story, but that's hardly surprising for you. I'd have given an extra 5 stars for pointing out just how good Bassett turkey sandwiches are, but Literotica won't let me...

That's what happens when you put things where they shouldn't be the number of times I lost my keys doing the selfsame thing. I told her that she was a silly girl, but then we have a beautiful family now. I love them all mercilessly.

Awesome story!

Your style of writing I conversed with as if you were grandpa telling us a story. Excellent storyteller and your choice of prose. I loved the story from the sister's vantage and I embraced his role as if I was the brother. Keep it up!

I first read in 10-20,,,I enjoyed as much this time.

I have read Baseball trip, Florida trip, It’s only fair and others. I really enjoy you writing.

I prefer shorter stories and more chapters, but I still am a devoted fan.

Wow. Loved it from the begining. would be so perfect of with life in with brother scene. <3

5 Stars *****

I think that my favorite part was when she took off her purity ring and threw it so hard that it left a dent in the wall. I could just hear her thinking, "I wouldn't have made that commitment if I knew that I would be loved like this!" Fortunately for her, the love of her life did get her cherry. It's been my experience from discussing this with all of the girls that I have slept with that they regretted their choice for their first time. So many of them commented that they wish that they had saved it for someone gentle and caring like me. I'd reply, "You're just saying that to make me feel better." She would say, "Seriously, no. I'm not. I really do wish that you had been my first." Yeah, I got that one a lot over the years. When you hear it often enough, you stop denying it and accept it.

5 stars

The first time should be special. For both girls and guys. It will be remembered for life. But very often it is unsuccessful. Hasty. Stupid. Without love. Rosaceous.

The heroes of the story are lucky. But now they must take responsibility for the child. For their lives and the lives of their partner.

Note to the author. Learn anatomy. Half a cock in a cunt is already tearing up the hymen. Even the head of the penis. Very rarely the hymen is so elastic that it will remain even after intercourse. And in about a third of cases there is no pain or blood.

Great story, love it. AAAAAA+++++

G-d I want more

very good!

Great story loved it , you should write more chapters of this story

it has been three babies since my sister got rid of her purity ring!

Well done, write some more.

Very Fun, Romantic, and Sweet.

Yikes! I could have done without her small breasts, her hairy bush, and her conflict over God. Other than that...

(1/27/2022) OOPS! Very funny and sweet. Nicely done.

Well I like small breasts, i dont get why most guys love d+++ fatbags hanging off a chick, already starting to sag, working their way down as she gets older, lol. She could be flat for all I care, its those nipples Im interested in!

I prefer shaved, but a furry blonde or redhead bush is kinda hot.

Honest and relatable . Some great emersive writing very provocative!!

Wow Wow WOWOWOWOWOW

EXCELLENT.

A plausible and relatable relationship, well described and understandable.

Totes Cute and Romantic!

10/10!!!!!

An excessively horny bitch with a purity ring!!

We love hot story with it ends up with a pregnant sister's love your work keep it up

Loved it. Very hot, well told story.

What else can I say that's not already been said-very hot,sibling sex is the best.write more. X

There goes spector dugan again; working miracles, weaving words into stories like the judean prophet turning water into wine. Absolutely Magisterial.

Such a good story, well written and so easy to read.

Great :)

Aside from the sex, really well written & readable! Good job!

Another winner!! Loved it.

Hot little story with the long climb up and the plateaus along the way. Thx to the writer for not giving a virgin a slutty looking shaved pussy. 🙄 The boy might even discover the joys of having his face tickled.

This was a charming story! Also short and sweet —- your longer stories are worth the time, but this was a nice change. I loved there chemistry, and his way with her. I loved her small chest and big bush, two of my favorite things.

How could Cassidy be the only person on the planet incapable of learning to masturbate with her other hand? I guess God had something to do with it. He must have had His reasons.

I just found your stories and love love love them. The only complaint I have is, for the love of everything horny, the hymen covers the entrance of the vag, it's not halfway down inside. Otherwise, thanks for yet another 5 ✨✨✨✨✨ story

God I love your stories! So fucking hot!

My cousin got his sister pregnant that way we are the only three people who know that he the father

That’s pretty much how my boss got pregnant with her son baby except she hide it from her daughter and her black boyfriend so he still thinks he the father and I helped her give birth to the baby with her son and daughter there because her boyfriend had a business trip so I helped her give birth to a healthy baby girl they named hope she four years old she was born on Christmas Day so that why they named her hope she was born during a blizzard and I lived next door and I’m also a part time midwife.

My mother did that to except she hid that from my father and sister I only one who knows the real father is to my baby brother . I even had to keep it a secret to my grandparents my mother gave birth at home and what ironic was the midwife that helped my mother give birth was pregnant with the same person baby and that was her husband lucky my baby brother came out healthy and looking kinda like my dad a couple months later my mom got a text from the midwife saying if she would want to bring my baby brother to there house she said sure now my moms four weeks pregnant with a set of twins and my dads still a idiot .

this is a bit similar to the way my sister and I started. she was 15 and is now 25. We have 5 children.

Very nice & well written. A definite 5 stars.

Bill S.

I wish this was SO much longer!!!

So sweet, indeed. Nicely worded 5

Best brother-sister-story ever. Just wish the final part (after "...still a dent where it cracked the paint." was much, much longer.

Thank you!

A cute, sexy story. Just too short. 5🌟

Would’ve loved more… or a follow up…

more please, this story is fantastic

I find myself regretting most of the five star ratings I've given other stories before this. Awesome writing, real emotions, and ridiculously hot! Thank you for sharing your gift, Spector_Dugan!

As opposed to another commenter, I do not regret any ratings I have given; not the (1's), not the (5's), not the ones where I said more stars are deserved.

THIS is a story deserving of more than five stars; brother and sister, caught up in mutual love for each other, and having a child to prove it!! THAT is real support for each other...maybe not the best, but still a dedication to each other. Sounds like the baby could have been put off with some birth control...a decision to have been made...and missed?? NOT JUDGING, just an observation on life....have had a moment like that in my life...how my first was conceived with my wife...not an "oops", and definitely conceived in a loving relationship!!

Hooray for this story!! 🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋💞💞💞💞💞🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Dicks absolutely can be too big. Babies only come out in a painful process with lots of hormones to soften the muscles. Regular vag absolutely has an individual length and girth limit bc tearing and cervical bruises HURT

10 stars!

That was great to read. It reminded me of when I broke my wrist. My sister helped me do things till I got used to being one handed. Thing was, we where already having sex with each other.

Her brother may have broken her but this story broke the website, we need to be able to give 10 stars for stories like yours!

"My Brother Broke Me:" - Writer/author 'Specter_Dugan' writes the perrrrfect brother and sister love, romance, incestuous sibling's incestuous coupling and consummation. The story with the proverbial "cherry on top" being life's commitment to each other...and impregnation!!! This story has all those features, and niceties from and to each other. This story is ideal and most of all the ultimate sibling love, incest/taboo story!! Unfortunately, due to limit time, I can't get enough; and, would change a thing.

Holy sh*t, wow!! One of the hottest stories

This story is PERFECT

Beautiful story, overwhelming love between brother and sister, so close that they 'two' became 'one'.

Even better the second or third time around. I love this story. It's not my all time favorite, but it's definitely in the top three. 5/5

Wow. This story gets three F's from me ... a Five rating, a Favorite, and a Follow for the author.

And brother/sister incest (along with parent/child) isn't my thing; but this was just so well written and believable and ... compelling.

Now I'm going to try some ground beef and whipped cream.