All Comments on 'My Brother, My Slave Pt. 06'

First off, glad you're writing again. I check periodically to see if you post new chapters for your stories. I was beyond excited to see this chapter up when I logged on. So, yay me!!!!

Second, I have no words for what happened at the end. Alexander finally tells Jacob he loves him but it appears as if Jacob is no longer. Is the vial filled with something that will turn Jacob into a vamp? I don't know. I'm speculating.

Please, I need to know! Until you post the next chapter, I'll wait patiently like the good Virgo I am.

So glad you're back. And I love this chapter I love the way this story is moving along. The tension is killing me. Can the dad just die so they can be together?!!!! Ughhhh amazing story. I'll put my trust in you to make it happy please? :)

Very sweet chapter. But what did he just do to jacob?!

Jacob was a vampire, just not a good one. He was unable to be a killer.

Alexander told Jacob he loved him, so that Jacob would die hearing the one thing he truly wanted.

It was a vial of poison.

i personally am glad this story is back ! and i think the vial was a memory earser because alexander stated that he had sucked off jacobbefore but he didnt know about it so maybe after alex gives jacob head he earses his memory i mean why would he kill the love off his life ? cAnt wait for more

Oh poor Jacob. I don't want you to have killed him but, his life kind of sucks. Maybe it is a memory eraser. Maybe he's only pretending to have killed him and will secret him away somewhere until he can kill his father! Yes I will go with that until you update!

Oh lawd Jacob nooo. Love this story. Its always like a treat when I see this story updated. Keep up the good work.

Great story, glad to see you back:)

So..... Is this the last chapter or there's more to come????

Great chapter unless that is how it ends. I don't think he killed him though or why would he have cared if the father killed him. why would he have given him blood to save him and stopped the bleeding after the father's attack? I think he wants to get rid of the father and then be able to keep Jacob. Can he if he is King and can make his own decisions. Interesting turn in the story. It was nice to see him show his brother some tenderness, though it was a big gamble b/c what if his father drank from Jacob again? that may be why he gave him this liquid. To hide him away maybe?

looking forward to more.

If it was the end and he killed his brother than that would make it a sucky ending in my POV just for the record. lol

I just found this web site so I just discovered this wonderful story. It is beautifully moving. I hope this is not the last chapter. However, if it is and Alex did poison Jacob it is still rather sweet in a twisted way. Alex knew he and Jacob would not be together much longer and that Jacob would be miserable without him. Maybe he thought it was the only way for Jacob to be happy.

One moment I read this: 'As far as Jacob could remember, I'd never sucked his cock before, but I knew it was something he craved.'

Then in the next, I was seeing this. ..

'I was used to sucking Jacob's cock. I was pretty good at giving head- like Jacob, I had learned quickly. And Jacob's cock was average in size, about 6'', so it wasn't incredibly difficult. His was the only cock I had ever serviced before though, and I intended to keep it that way.' 

Please clarify. He can't say he's never sucked him in one breath and say he had in the next breath pls.

That was so sad, it was very touching and I hope its not.the.last chapter. I am waiting for more. Alexander is such a mysterious figure whereas Jacob is so open and expressive. It kinda reminds me of me and my sister. Of course we are both girls and I'm the submissive not the dominant and its not that rough but still we both are lovers (in secret) but I am way more expressive and my sister rarely shows that she cares. Once again im very anticipated for next chapter. Please keep writing ur amazing stories

This story is amazing like reading a book but I need more I've been waiting ages for this one and some of ur others can't wait to keep reading sooo good

U r such. Good writer pizza update tho book I can see it continuing I wanna know what's happen so play update

I actually cryed i think the incest is a tad hot with the vampires and well personally ive had sex with my stepbrother morley so je forced me

Me but still liked it in the end and he still dose it to me even tho hes in collage now and it made me cry the ending

Is he dead?