All Comments on 'My Brother Steve'

reading as soon as it is mentioned

shitty story it wasn't even interesting i couldn't even get past the first half of the first page nothing to draw you in

The previous comments are overly rude. I really liked your story. I've read it three different times (like I search for it like every year) because I like it.

...it was a very enjoyable tale. Not much lead-in or character development, but all-in-all an exciting story of brother-sister loving.

people do not just go from being mad to screwing in seconds keep it atleast sounding realistic and believable what you wrote here should have been spread out over months not hours and there was no back ground to tell what thier relationship was like before all in all a total waste of time

Wow, this was amazing. it made me so wet to the point where my lace underwear were dripping and then cum all in one story. a combination of nice, sweet, naughty and sexy at the same time.

It is "would HAVE", not "would OF". That's all, really.

Well shit. That as sexy. (: