All Comments on 'My Brother's Bestfriend, Tyler. Ch. 08'

by Funlovingflirt1

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jshsalvjshsalvover 6 years ago
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I gave you your usual 5 for the story although, I hope something new is entertained because it IS beginning to get old and am losing interest in it. Enjoyed most of it very much, but the last couple chapters are starting to become less than I expect from your writings That' just one man's opinion and in no way mean to less your abilities as a writer since I do enjoy it. No disrespect meant I will continue to read what you publish, I do think you have a great way of putting your thoughts to words.

rapperbsrapperbsover 6 years ago
Good Story!

I enjoyed the story (sad they had no bed!). In Katie’s own words her friends experience was too extreme for her taste. It just seemed like toward the end it was a little rougher than Katie would have liked. Your story is well written!

Thanks for writing!

dreamer3366dreamer3366over 6 years ago
Nice tangent

Whatever you do to end this series please do not invite a third person. Thank you.

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